Young gun

I'm not familiar with what kind of poetry this is called so I'll just give an opinion. Eliminate the need to needlessly play around with words.Put more substance into the ...

What is needed desperately here is creativity.Time and again we here of people cribbing that the cant be themselves and they must put up a facade to be accepted. And ...

Not bad but you can work on being clearer about your ideas in other poems. Good luck

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Please reply to this as the debate group is turning inactive.

The question here is simple.Which is faster for a nations growth and overall development. Is it development of business and entrepreneurship or is it a good government?

I really feel a little doubtful about the badges part because, it just adds to the 'status' problem.We already have those gold blue and red stars beneath the display pictures ...

The special effects is the only reason you need to watch it.See it in 3d and don't give much about the storyline.

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I thought of creating this thread for all those who simply wanted their work read and commented in short instead of receiving critiques(though critiques are also welcome). The idea is ...

Apparently lot of people give writing tips and writing tutorial claiming that they can help improve someones writing. The point is ...should this not come from accomplished writers?By that I ...

Your work just keeps getting better and better. Something so deep covered it such short sentences,yet done more effectively than a 40 line poem. In the first paragraph it comes ...

Though I uploaded an attachment of a word document ,the work does not get says a general error occured and the file cannot be viewed.